Comments!

Megan Davis: Wild Duck Journal 1
In your journal you keep the plot and style very separate. Are they connected in any way? I think that the style builds and enhances the plot, but overall the plot is the most important aspect of the play.

Matt Merckling: Wild Duck Journal 2
I think you have a good foundation here!  What you are saying is definitely true.  I think that you need to elaborate more and go a little deeper.  Right now, I do not know where "deeper" is, but I think you can get there.  Your evidence backs up your point very well, but you need more.  Overall, I really like what you have here.

Tate Bankston: Wild Duck Journal 1
I completely agree with the point in the first paragraph.  You have good evidence of both authors' style, but you do not connect it back to the plot.  Adding a sentence or two would clarify how the style builds the plot in each play.